Life has left me stranded
Fending for myself
Fighting my own battles
With no one to back me up
I’ve been knocked down
Way too many times
I don’t want to get back up
I have no strength left in me
Why couldn’t it have been kinder
Treated me a little better
Now I don’t know who I am
Or where I am
I guess I lost the fight
Lost myself
Lost my mind
I’m dead inside
i like this poem i guess because i can like so relate to it. its kind of scary to be here and feeling like your dead inside and that it seems that you can no longer go on but just some how keep living and going on. keep the faith.
almost sounds like a song chorus or something like that. its always nice to be able to wrap up all of your emotions at the end of the poem with a few lines.
great poem... reminds me of how i feel sometimes... at least it always passes