The smell always stayed the same,
A pleasent memory of my paps
when I was younger. He'd spend hours
in the field, sweating in his worn plaid cap
grunting from the pain in his aching back. After
the sun had fallen he sat in his lazy-boy with a pipe.
He was an old man, even when I was young,
his mustache was tarnished from the smoke
of his pipe that burned eternally. His hands
were rough, his face had red splotches, he spoke
with an irritated voice. My life was changed
'cause of this man I loved so dear.
Till late one summer, he fell from his tractor,
the blades tore him apart one by one,
I never knew what it was like to miss
till I found he was gone. Where had he gone?
I looked for days to find him but he wasn't there.
So the smell of his house kept me safe.
Memories are stored in this house from my
childhood. There are the pipe burns on the chair
where he'd fall asleep, dropping the hot coal.
The books that he read stacked high in the air,
proud to be so tall. My paps was buried
under his house, so the smell is the greatest of all.
I wish you had told me it wasn't true before you made me cry. This was a good one. Proud to know you're from Georgia too.
Jessica
Well, I could almost find you and kick your butt. You really had me going there. This is beautiful, even if it isn't a true story. I've known many people such as your "paps". Hard-working, gravelly-voiced, but loving in the best ways. The ways that matter where a man puts him self behind those he swore to provide for. I loved this one.
Jessica