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Promises made

Roads hard to keep

Overly sensitive

Miserably engrossed

Inwardly suffering

Severing all ties

Enduring internal rose



To have and to hold

Old yet undying



Leaving your side

Opposing all contact

Veering from your promise

Every day held true.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Poem written 9/15  concerning the promise that I made to love one man for the rest of my life and the commitment that has been so hard to break, even after being separated for almost a year.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 6:42am
©19 September 2010 - 2:44am — dancewmoonlight
19 September 2010 - 3:40am — shadow88d
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i think your poem was beyond great, because i can tell you put your heart into what you said. check out mines and tell me what you think.