Kinda Short. First Poem I'm going to post on here. Give me a break I don't do this often(by that I mean post my words on a site for people to see). Critisism however is accpeted.
M any times I've wondered "Who am I?"
E very time I came up blank.
A nd I realized just how MEANINGLESS I was.
N ow it occured to me that I didn't have purpose,
I f I didn't have purpose than I was MEANINGLESS?
N ever would I matter if I couldn't find my purpose.
G od made me, but without purpose?
L ong looks at happy smiles made me realize,
E xcept when I was MEANINGLESS I was happy.
S o I found my purpose.
S oon I forgot the purpose of being MEANINGLESS.
And if being MEANINGLESS doesn't have a purpose than being MEANINGLESS is MEANINGLESS.
Nice bit of poetry and
Nice bit of poetry and perhaps the right thing for the friend of yours .. :)
Although , a slight word of caution .... Sometimes the problem of creating a poetry centered around a word is that .. there would be a compromise in it's essence just to maintain a poetic continuity . I know you would never fall in this trap :) ... still a simple message from someone actually has been in that trap :P
Do review a few poems of mine if time permits .. :)
He who knoweth himself ... knoweth the world ....
Thank You
I don't often share my poetry but when I do people either downright discourage me or tell me how great it is you reached a happy medium. I will review your poetry. Thank you again.