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Love And Lust
Pathetic it is to honor your physique and visage
As when I look beyond, there's nothing more to boast
But little you told, the reason that I cannot judge
Why don't you lend me a bit of your innermost?
Respect and love- the passion that must be requited
Love I give, lust glimmers in your mind
Deference I need, faithfully I chose to be disrespected
Fraud is inevitable, eyes became blind.
Right nor wrong, neither I can consider
My heart leaps out of its ribs as you approach
Mind starts proclaiming a war against her
Yet she is firm, not listening to any coach
hi
love of a dedicated woman no man should abuse.
∞ HUGGY ∞
Hello thanks!
I appreciate your comment. :) Sometimes, a woman is blinded by her love that she can take everything even the abuiveness of her man.
Diana
hmm
I find that it is really not love, but value of ones self that lets us allow others to abuse us. And abusers feed on this weakness.
∞ HUGGY ∞
hmmm back
Sometimes women undervalue themselves because of their men and that's when love becomes wrong. Saddest part of all.
Diana
hmm back back
i agree.
∞ HUGGY ∞
I liked this a lot.
I liked this a lot. Especially this line: "Deference I need, faithfully I chose to be disrespected." You have a wonderful way with words in this poem.
words are my emotions
Thankyou for the comment! I guessed I was heightened by my emotions with this one back then. :)
Diana