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Pathetic it is to honor your physique and visage
As when I look beyond, there's nothing more to boast
But little you told, the reason that I cannot judge
Why don't you lend me a bit of your innermost?

 

Respect and love- the passion that must be requited
Love I give, lust glimmers in your mind
Deference I need, faithfully I chose to be disrespected
Fraud is inevitable, eyes became blind.

 

Right nor wrong, neither I can consider
My heart leaps out of its ribs as you approach
Mind starts proclaiming a war against her
Yet she is firm, not listening to any coach

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last updated 4 July 2013 - 5:05pm
©21 July 2012 - 1:34am — yellowcabs
23 July 2013 - 9:51am — huggybear
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hi

love of a dedicated woman no man should abuse.

∞ HUGGY ∞

23 July 2013 - 10:41am — yellowcabs
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Hello thanks!

I appreciate your comment. :) Sometimes, a woman is blinded by her love that she can take everything even the abuiveness of her man.

Diana

23 July 2013 - 10:53am — huggybear
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hmm

I find that it is really  not love, but value of ones self that lets us allow others to abuse us. And abusers feed on this weakness.

∞ HUGGY ∞

23 July 2013 - 1:46pm — yellowcabs
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hmmm back

Sometimes women undervalue themselves because of their men and that's when love becomes wrong. Saddest part of all.

Diana

23 July 2013 - 1:52pm — huggybear
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hmm back back

i agree. 

∞ HUGGY ∞

19 July 2013 - 3:30am — justanotherscreename
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I liked this a lot.

I liked this a lot. Especially this line: "Deference I need, faithfully I chose to be disrespected." You have a wonderful way with words in this poem.

19 July 2013 - 3:43am — yellowcabs
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words are my emotions

Thankyou for the comment! I guessed I was heightened by my emotions with this one back then. :)

Diana