Flying away

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PAPER PURSUIT

 

I am no scholar, and I am sure it shows, woe,

Through the repetitious conceptions I put down

In my constant cries as an amateur poetry boy

Begging for attention in your sweet sentiments,

Complimentary praise, the tasty nectar drawn

With a syphoning straw, from the fog of flattery.

I can hear the interdimensional elves laughing

At me... they well know this life is but a scam.

The voices leap upward in a flash and storm to

Attack me, the frightened victim of delirium and

Drunken screams, then they pierce my fragile

Heart with a shining knife of scolding white light

As the stench of stupidity rises and will always

Wisp with its sedative poison to carry my corpse

Floating into the eternal demise, remembrance:

Yeah, Pungus is just another insignificant sinner.

 

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saiom's picture

your aura

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'I am no scholar'  Quite the contrary shows.. it seems to me you must have had many lives to be such a compassionate sensitive and illuminating poet



'they pierce my fragile

heart with a shining knife of scolding white light'

majestic

 

hope you never again call yourself a sinner ... you are a teacher of everyone who reads your poems and all who come into contact with your aura

 

 



 

 

georgeschaefer's picture

Whitman wasn't a scholar and

Whitman wasn't a scholar and neither was Bukowski.  Hell, shocking as it may be, I'm not a scholar either.  Keep writing and growing as a poet and artist.  Don't let any outer noise dissuade you.