we sail the great gold sunny skies
our fleet of flying ships stream through clouds
and makes emotion dissipate away
we shout messages to the birds
who scatter in a spasm of incredible flight
as they dive to the deep for salmon,
bringing it aboard as offering to feast.
what is ever better than the sparkling sheen
of eternal feathers in a flock of service
we whirl into interdimensional starry portals
which bring us to the candelit hallway of gods,
relaxing in thrones, enchanting brilliant verse
This is another one of your
This is another one of your choreography poems, and I am just astounded by the way you set so much into motion in such a few words. This poem reminds me---and I mean this as the highest of compliments---of Wallace Stevens; great poem, "Chaos In Motion And Not In Motion" (which I heartily recommend to you). I am convinced that you are one of the most talented Poets on postpoems, and I applaud your accomplishment.
Starward
You are not only a great poet
You are not only a great poet and poetry critic, but a lovely friend too. You give so much energy to share your fine thoughts with fellow poets; and you should know how bright you make people feel, thus I am eternally grateful for your existence here. Thank you Starward
bananas are the perfect food
for prostitutes
Coming from a Poet of your
Coming from a Poet of your stature, that is quite a compliment, and I thank you!!!
Starward