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We need a savior dearly.
But reaching for meaning,
the world becomes a great ghost
and shatters into fragments
betwixt our fingers desperation.
Now certainly clutching nothing,
certain irrevocable dissolution,
answer to the prayers
takes time to replenish
and provides a fountain in the abyss
from which we shall sip
and intoxicate involvement
within pure eternity.
' a fountain in the abyss' as
' a fountain in the abyss'
as beautiful as 'a ship on the horizon'
Oh thank you. And cool
Oh thank you. And cool comparison
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Again we see the great power
Again we see the great power your ing-suffixes promote and present. I like the order in which you show the process: from the need for a savior, through the shattering, the clutching, then the realization of irrevocable dissolution, leads to the prayers of replenishment which then provides a fountain of spiritual sustenance that leads to eternity. This is an entire epic compressed in a few lines. Callimachus and Cunningham are very likely applauding you right now.
Starward
You are my greatest Christmas
You are my greatest Christmas gift, seriously.
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Thank you. And again I can
Thank you. And again I can say that, coming from you, this compliment is very, very precious to me, and very much appreciated.
Starward