Drifting - Extended Version

  Drifting



I close my eyes and drift away

there are no more worries here today

I find a place where I can be

all that's ever been asked of me



I feel my soul begin to rise

never before have I felt so alive

I open the door to real compassion

and begin to see love's reaction



(Drifting through the music

I'm drifting away to it

Drifting through the music

open my eyes and I might lose it)



I take my time and start to think

and feel my troubles begin to sink

I fall into a trance like state

eyes closed but still awake



I forgive my enemies, every one, right here

as my heart now forgets all fear

I begin to write songs in my head

and poems that will never ever be said



(Drifting through the music

I'm drifting away to it

Drifting through the music

open my eyes and I might lose it)



I let my emotions take control

and finally let my dreams be told

I can forget all that I have done

and focus on what I can become



I know that this can't last

as I hold my breathe so time won't pass

I take only what I can give,

open my eyes and start to live





(Drifting through the music

I'm drifting away to it

Drifting through the music

open my eyes and I might lose it)




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awesome man.
i can hear like queens of the stonage mixed with korn or mudvayne in there.
yeah you got style man. most fuckers on here tend to chopped up flow, including me... sometimes
but it's a constant even flow. with that in mind, not saying this is bad, cause it's good and better to follow, but deviating is always coold to try too.
but then again, i have a loose train of thought that creates rails branching off of the main track sooner or later joining making it all make sense like a kid with "adhd" lmao. but good shit man... good shit reminds me of getting high, or doing shrooms lmao.