In the Making

My deepest apologies
How long have you been waiting
for terms yet to be set
yet set in stone?
Gazing into souls
and shields that separate us
From what we've believed
to be our own

A distance undefined
this journey of eyes never to meet
Can one measure fear
if fear never stands alone?
Choose your battles wisely
Staggered counts ever changing
The last faithful guard stands
to fall alone

Lay leash upon your gaze
Disobedient, yet speaks the truth
If They already see you here
as I have always known
Bewilder your fanatics
Secret arrows, your appeal
For once the battle begins
It's yours alone

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SSmoothie's picture

Love it!

Awesome write! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

RaveDave's picture

Thanks SS... glad you enjoyed

Thanks SS... glad you enjoyed it.

SSmoothie's picture

Yes the themes are personally

Yes the themes are personally relevant to me! Reminds me of my own attempt to encapsulate this concept with arrows of discontent and a few others I wrote dealing with similar ideas :) can't wait to read more! :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."