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Lost for the moment, Gala within

 

The clouds of ash and smoke dance, spin

 

 

 

Deep breath from places unknown

 

Rises Rising comes a groan

 

 

 

Tremor all around

 

as if the sky is crashing down all around

 

 

 

This Devilish place I'm trapped in

 

Smiles its shark-toothed grin

 

 

 

Across me, still warm this viscous fluid flow

 

Where I'm at, what's going on, still I do not know

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last updated 20 July 2015 - 3:26am
©18 July 2015 - 12:51am — czjustanemptyhead
20 July 2015 - 3:19am — allets
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This Poem

is my reason for writing mostly in free verse and open or blank verse. Your rhyming is precise, I tend to not want to take the time to find the perfect rhyme. :D ~allets~

 

 

20 July 2015 - 3:29am — czjustanemptyhead
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Thanks I guess its just how I

Thanks I guess its just how I see it when I write