Home

Clan?

Folder: 
poems 1

Blue lightning Rages across the sky

You Hear Them Calling

Without food,  water

Thunder Bellows

As you wander

Delirious

Still They Call

Brilliant Flash

Mighty Roar

Cling to your Spear

Blood,  Sweat in your eyes

up  Get UP  they call

Fierce Slash  

Beastly Charge

Quick Step

Powerful Thrust

Claws Wildly Tear Flesh

Now Strike Now

Decisive lunge Pierces the Veil

Here You Stand

                MARKED

Spirit Warrior Bear Clan

Author's Notes/Comments: 

What do you think?

View czjustanemptyhead's Full Portfolio
tags:
  • Login to post comments
  • 253 reads

last updated 29 June 2015 - 2:11am
©29 June 2015 - 2:11am — czjustanemptyhead
11 July 2015 - 3:23am — Dont_punch_grandpa
Dont_punch_grandpa's picture

bloody good

So epic dude, awesome poem

"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

11 July 2015 - 10:37pm — czjustanemptyhead
czjustanemptyhead's picture

Thanks man glad you enjoyed

Thanks man glad you enjoyed it

5 July 2015 - 4:36pm — allets
allets's picture

Amazing Write

so much action, the storm is felt, the battle epic :D ~allets~

 

 

6 July 2015 - 2:04am — czjustanemptyhead
czjustanemptyhead's picture

I'm glad you enjoyed the

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I had hoped to write a story with a clear picture