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That day you walked by 

smile on your lips

Glimmer of your eye

 

Skipped a beat

Mouth went dry

How could we meet

 

Something I managed to say

Made you laugh

You let me stay

 

I lost myself in your eyes

As we talked and laughed

Until the sun rose in the morning skies

 

The memories still remain

Even after all these years

Thats when I fell like rain

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©28 June 2015 - 7:01am — czjustanemptyhead
21 July 2015 - 6:13pm — Dont_punch_grandpa
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Sheer amazing man 

Sheer amazing man 

"Some people die at 25 but buried at 75" Benjamin Franklin 

22 July 2015 - 12:03am — czjustanemptyhead
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Thanks man

Thanks man

28 June 2015 - 8:14am — hopelessly-candid
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Wow that's really beautiful

Wow that's really beautiful :)

28 June 2015 - 1:08pm — czjustanemptyhead
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Thank you. That's quite the

Thank you. That's quite the compliment coming from you. I read a few of yours and i'm not the word smith that you are but I try.

19 July 2015 - 2:42am — allets
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So Far, My Favorite

It has continuity, substance, and unity - enjoyed! ~allets~

 

 

19 July 2015 - 5:30pm — czjustanemptyhead
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Thank you so much Glad you

Thank you so much Glad you enjoyed it