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As my body reaches the bottom of the ocean

What’s all this commotion?

I shouldn’t have taken that potion.

At this moment felling all types of emotions

 

I try to reach the surface

Knowing I have a purpose

I am not worthless

 

Will it be too late?

WAAAIT! Don’t close that gate!!!...

 

 

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last updated 22 June 2015 - 6:15pm
©22 June 2015 - 4:27pm — Cyndii
28 June 2015 - 1:31pm — a.griffiths57
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This sounds like dangerous

This sounds like dangerous fashion to me - for words that will pass very prettily without you overcoming to the sea.?? Maybe to meditate and think through the emotions and thoughts that yearn clarity for, then into relax mode and let all those feelings surface and you will have revitalized yourself. Great poem and a lovely lively write despite the dark sombre anguish applied.

 

 

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23 June 2015 - 10:56pm — allets
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Surviving

To reach the ocean's bed
I want to sleep
but instead
I will swim with effort
abort the end of breath
a human can never
get in too deep.
.
Lady A
06-23-15
644p

 

 

23 June 2015 - 11:05pm — Cyndii
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Amazing words!! Really good

Amazing words!! Really good writing, I like it!!