I'm a mess ...

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Cyndii

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I'm a mess

Is it because I'm stressed?

I know you couldn't care less

Why don't I just confess?

should I wait for you to guess?

No! I need to get this of my chest.

You made me fell hard.

There I said it

there's no going back now

I hate to admitted.

Tell me you love me

before I drown in this deep blue sea

Cause' it makes me sick

knowing there's a chance of you wanting to be free.

I just need to take a breath

before all of this turns into death.

I am not a safe bet

but my heart its set

and that's something you don't get.

Author's Notes/Comments:

hope you enjoyed!! I'm not really a good writer I just like to write and read :)

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21 June 2015 - 10:48am — a.griffiths57

I'm a Mess:

I liked your poem very much; what i thought would be just run of the mill poetry; turned out quite an interesting write. Your poem here has a punchy short and fast, delivery of content. Jumping in with your eyes wide open and taking a bet on you both and your deepening relationship is brilliant. Direct, brief,and even humourus, this poem is a good write and reads well.

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57

21 June 2015 - 11:59am — Cyndii