Aren't I supposed to feel something

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I look into your eyes

As you look into mine

Aren't I supposed to feel something?



I cup my hand

As you place yours in mine

Aren't I supposed to feel something?



I place my lips to yours

As you lean in for a kiss

Aren't I supposed to feel something?



I tremble while i lay

As you enter and fill my insides

Aren't I supposed to feel something?



I part from

As you leave my side

Aren't I supposed to feel something?

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Rachel  Marie Tate's picture

Having been with one man for the last 9 years, I can totally relate to this... there are times in our relationship where things become so functional and robotic, it's just like going thru the motions without any feeling or passion behind it... I don't have any poetry that speaks on this and I love how you've nailed the feeling, even if you are talking about a random sexual encounter and not a relationship you've been in long term, the feeling can exist in several different types of situations- this is a lovely write and I also appreciate the shapely structure and repetition in the piece :-)