We used to make up madrigals
Just because they were beautiful
Not caring that they were passè
I remember your mouth opened into a perfect O
Singing "fa, la, la"
I longed to kiss you so much
But I couldn't commit that heresy
Because your voice made the nightingale
Sound like Bob Dylan
And your face was so serene
That a sunset
Looked like a massacre
In comparison
Excellent! Your use of metaphor is brilliant!
Starward