Sunlight on your face
Makes you shine
Like a copper coin
And your smile glints
Like white hot moonlight
On a perfectly black night
I never thought
That something so simple
Could make you more handsome
Make your kisses even sweeter
I think you'll blind me
And burn me
But lets stand here
Until the sun descends
Behind the approaching clouds
And destroys the illusion
I admire the way your metaphors work. The conclusion of this poem is very dramatic!
Starward