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Missing you
I know how it felt to be pulled away,
I messed up and really didn't have many words to say,
Please forgive me for all I have done.
Just know I'm fighting to make us all one.
I know how it felt to be pulled away,
I messed up and really didn't have many words to say,
Please forgive me for all I have done.
Just know I'm fighting to make us all one.
What Rhyme Does
This is writing to the rhyme, meaning is unusual because of the strain to rhyme. I have read rhymed verse with loads of emotion and images, metaphor and technique, this was pretty flat an sentimental - read more poetry by contemporary poets to see what I mean. Depth is missing - Lady A
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