The one

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Love

I keep looking in all the wrong places, where your supposed to be.But I never seem to find you, and you're all I long to see.

I just can't seem to understand, what it was that changed your mind.All this time I thought I knew you, when really I was blind.But know that I do not hate, and I know I never will.

Because I cared about you then, and I care about you still.

Even though you hurt me, I can't seem to let you go.

But I will go on without you, and I want to make sure you know.

It will take some time to mend,the damage that you've done.

But broken hearts do heal, that's why I stay and not run.

For now, the tears may be falling and my thoughts keep circling you.But soon, things will get better, if you have hope then they always do.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just some a poem I put down when I was bored...

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crystal_chicka2006's picture

Thanks, I just sat down and wrote it but I looked at it once you said the wording was a bit off so I fixed it

Ryan Amirault's picture

This poem is very good. There are a few spots where the wording is a bit off, but it has meaning and overall flows pretty well. Good job!