i pulled the lever to let HIM go forever..

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i was thrown away like a hand grenade on one cold summers day..

never throught it would happen but the day came..

he pulled the lever to let me go forever.

i was a pebble in his shoe that through off his balance,

he was a dancer; a beautiful dancer he needs his balance.

i was too much of a challenge for him to handle

i was too much of a burden for him to handle ..

i was left with a fragment of passion until his soul caressed my stomach to throw up every feeling inside that i had of him..

puked it out so fast i almost died; 

cried for whatever it was worth i brought forth every instant truth of being..

always told the truth,

well for the most part..

you know how people are; little white lies

say things they dont really mean but really do i see right through you.

if you only knew what i did

oh what i did? yeah i did it.

you gave me up first.

i tried to reattach the torn wounds but little did i know you wanted to bleed withought me in the picture..

bleed on....

i will not try to fix the faucet fixture of your woundless heartless sleeve.

your gifted in a way you think everything is funny;

haha so funny now tell me, did you really love me?..

you always said you'd let me be a free bird and fly wherever the wind blew but quite the contrary...

you did the opposite.

you caged me in a prison cell i will forever be stuck in.

im NOTHING free like you thought i would be.

except for the love i give to you is free and nothing in return..

i feel the burn of the sun against my back and wings; it took an awkward turn 

the bird that i sang with flew a different route 

our melodies didnt sound in tune so now im falling out..

i cannot fly withought my singing bird around;

the wind you blew was so hard it tore my wings apart..

 

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

a late nite expression..

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i was left with a fragment of

i was left with a fragment of passion until his soul caressed my stomach to throw up every feeling inside that i had of him..


great lines!


you really hit your stride in the latter part of this and the bird metaphor that can often be clichéd works quite well here as, for me, it takes on an angelic quality.


i hope to see more of your writing.