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This is a very powerful poem, and those final two lines are extremely powerful. One can almost hear the silence while reading your words. Excellent!
Starward
Glad to hear that. It hadn't always felt that way. Perhaps, no matter what brings on or sustains the silence would eventually give way to the breaking of that silence by some means. Thanks kindly.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver
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This is a very powerful poem,
This is a very powerful poem, and those final two lines are extremely powerful. One can almost hear the silence while reading your words. Excellent!
Starward
Glad to hear that. It hadn't
Glad to hear that. It hadn't always felt that way. Perhaps, no matter what brings on or sustains the silence would eventually give way to the breaking of that silence by some means. Thanks kindly.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver