What a haunting metaphor of, or for, despair you have created here. I particularly like the word play in the first line, and between the fifth and seventh lines. Your customary verbal skill is well displayed in the poem.
The haunting aspect that is ever in the back of our minds is what brings language to its defining moment, a goal that poetry is well wedded to. Or so I have led over all the years and scrapes to believe.
What a haunting metaphor of,
What a haunting metaphor of, or for, despair you have created here. I particularly like the word play in the first line, and between the fifth and seventh lines. Your customary verbal skill is well displayed in the poem.
J-Called
The haunting aspect that is
The haunting aspect that is ever in the back of our minds is what brings language to its defining moment, a goal that poetry is well wedded to. Or so I have led over all the years and scrapes to believe.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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