I have just one criticism: this poem is so moving, that I could only wish it was much longer. But, more seriously, you have encapsulated the saint's story in a way that moves briskly, yet profoundly. You should be very, very (and if I may say so, very) pleased with this literary accomplishment.
I have just one criticism:
I have just one criticism: this poem is so moving, that I could only wish it was much longer. But, more seriously, you have encapsulated the saint's story in a way that moves briskly, yet profoundly. You should be very, very (and if I may say so, very) pleased with this literary accomplishment.
Starward
Thanks Starward. That is
Thanks Starward. That is quite succinct, an encapsulization in verse.
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You honored Saint Valentine
My pleasure, and thanks for the reply. You honored Saint Valentine very well.
Starward