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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

I have just one criticism: 

I have just one criticism:  this poem is so moving, that I could only wish it was much longer.  But, more seriously, you have encapsulated the saint's story in a way that moves briskly, yet profoundly.  You should be very, very (and if I may say so, very) pleased with this literary accomplishment.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]

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Thanks Starward. That is

Thanks Starward. That is quite succinct, an encapsulization in verse.


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S74rw4rd-13d's picture

You honored Saint Valentine

My pleasure, and thanks for the reply.  You honored Saint Valentine very well.


Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]