ever closer they rumble

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ever closer they rumble

 

 

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patriciajj's picture

You could read a shopping

You could read a shopping list and it would sound elegant, so the listening experience was otherworldly in its excellence. But savoring the words in print had its own transcendental rapture and ability to electrify.

 

"the world indeed is too much with us"

 

Wow! That's a line to die for. But then, so is the next line and the next . . . one can be absolutely submerged in the artistry and the feel of this. 

 

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Thanks kindly Ms Patricia.

Thanks kindly Ms Patricia. Glad you gave ear and sensibility to this poem along with the rest that are shared here and elsewhere.


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