The third line gives a cold chill, then the sixth line sounds almost playful with its alliteration, and then the huge impact of that last line with the cattlecars ready to roll behind a locomotive belching coalsmoke, and into the camps where the crematories belch human fleshsmoke.
Your having highlighted those lines demonstrates the core fear being expressed- that inextricable feeling of helplessness in the path of a fast forming snowballing avalanche that swallows everything in its trajectory. Thank you for your kindness on this poem, its communication is returning full circle.
The third line gives a cold
The third line gives a cold chill, then the sixth line sounds almost playful with its alliteration, and then the huge impact of that last line with the cattlecars ready to roll behind a locomotive belching coalsmoke, and into the camps where the crematories belch human fleshsmoke.
Starward
Your having highlighted those
Your having highlighted those lines demonstrates the core fear being expressed- that inextricable feeling of helplessness in the path of a fast forming snowballing avalanche that swallows everything in its trajectory. Thank you for your kindness on this poem, its communication is returning full circle.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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