I like the format of this poem. And "severed umblical dreams"?---that is one of your finest, most striking, phrases. And "barometic exuberance" runs a close second to it. Your verbal skills are, consistently, impressive from poem to poem.
Thank you kindly Starward. Turns of phrases are quite exciting and bring the mind to thoughts and places it otherwise won't, many poems and poets over millennia have pushed and stretched language to its extreme limits and thus breaking through much like word coinage when there aren't other conventional ways of saying what has to be said.
I like the format of this
I like the format of this poem. And "severed umblical dreams"?---that is one of your finest, most striking, phrases. And "barometic exuberance" runs a close second to it. Your verbal skills are, consistently, impressive from poem to poem.
Starward
Thank you kindly Starward.
Thank you kindly Starward. Turns of phrases are quite exciting and bring the mind to thoughts and places it otherwise won't, many poems and poets over millennia have pushed and stretched language to its extreme limits and thus breaking through much like word coinage when there aren't other conventional ways of saying what has to be said.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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