friend zoned

Folder: 
Poetry Discourse

 

 

 

 

~ imPRESSions ~

Author's Notes/Comments: 

After the theme picked up by George Schaefer

J-C4113D's picture

I applaud the strong imagery

I applaud the strong imagery which you deploy with such a gentle tone.


J-Called

redbrick's picture

Many thanks Starward. The

Many thanks Starward. The tone had to be gentle with respect to the theme and emotional height of the moment in which the poem's tale takes place. I am just glad that in this particular case it worked out. Your feedback has assured me of this without a speck of doubt. Cheers! Rik.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

patriciajj's picture

No matter what the subject,

No matter what the subject, you bathe it in eloquence and mold it into mesmerizing art. 

 

Simply stunned. 

redbrick's picture

Thanks dear Patricia. Still

Thanks dear Patricia. Still on a quest to paint a poem like the night scene café in Arles by dear Vincent.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

patriciajj's picture

If anyone could pull it off,

If anyone could pull it off, it would be you. Awesome idea!