First, this is a very visual Haiku---just like being there in the moment: bravo! Secondly, you totally have respected the traditional American/English Haiku, with the 5/7/5 format, and for that you have my sincere applause.
My pleasure---it seems, to me, to be a very rare experience to find a Haiku so visually expressive, yet fully comformable to the classic Haiku form. I am very glad to applaud your accomplished example here.
First, this is a very visual
First, this is a very visual Haiku---just like being there in the moment: bravo! Secondly, you totally have respected the traditional American/English Haiku, with the 5/7/5 format, and for that you have my sincere applause.
Starward
Thank you Starward for your
Thank you Starward for your kind words in comment.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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My pleasure---it seems, to
My pleasure---it seems, to me, to be a very rare experience to find a Haiku so visually expressive, yet fully comformable to the classic Haiku form. I am very glad to applaud your accomplished example here.
Starward