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Oh Mother
How your perfect child,
Once perfect to you,
Could have made these marks
In her arms, while you never knew
And yet something told you
That all was not right,
Don't aknowledge it mother
Out of mind, out of sight,
Until today, you'd sugar
Coated all the bad
Perfect family, perfect house
Always happy, never sad
And then I shattered your world
With something strange and new
A razor blade went through my arm
A cut for me, a cut for you
Two white scars are all that remain
Of that fateful day
I never want to see the pain
I caused you as I lay
Your face was white
Your tears glistened and,
Your eyes grew redder
As you listened
To my troubles, long
In wait, and watched cry
And whisper sweet
And sorrowful goodbye
I just randomly stumbled across this and I like this one a lot, in a poetic kind of way (not because of what it is talking about), I liked how it just flowed so easily and was so deep and emotional, glad writing can help ya feel a lil better (like it does me), I jsut hope next time if there is a next time- before you cut, write first...might help ya not do it in the first place. In either case, you are a very good writer and i really like your stuff, i invite you to check out some of my stuff sometime if you wish, take care and peace- keep writtin!
Written by: Joel