Snapped in half
Broken as easily as a twig
Shredded like a piece of paper
Cracked like a window slammed shut
Shattered as easily as the good china
Feelings as complicated as high school algebra
Emotions as intricate as a spider web
My mind reeling
Going forwards then back like someones pressing the buttons on a VCR
Memories as colorful as a childs first finger painting
Thoughts screaming past like a semi on the ighway
My heart more cluttered than a mad scientists lab
Nothing makes sense
Everything rushes forward at once
And I pray for a quick ending to the blinding madness
love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poetess and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq