bLaCk HoLe

Images swirl through my mind

They create a whirlpool

I can't escape from

Within the blink of an eye

It all changes

Where the whirlpool once was

There is now a black hole

As I grab for something

Anything

To keep me from being sucked in

I realize

My feeble attempts are useless

Even tho I'm hanging on

The black hole drains me

And all thats left

Is a shadow of my former self

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this was written not long after i moved to chicago bc of all thing crap i'd been thru

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Very gripping, abrupt, and unpleasant in a thoroughly clever way (yes, that was a compliment). I enjoyed it much.