To say I do not love you
is deceit within my heart
and the ability to deceive
is consequencal in the dark
if compassion overwhelms
denial becomes dangerous
should the breeze so slightly whispher
redemption is meaningless
desire will not serve as an excuse
though the flames refuse to die
leave no time to delinate
the paranoia collects my mind
forgive my silent bleeding
collecting broken dreams
please protect my fragile dawn
though pointless it may seem
i love it .. it has rhyme, but it didnt mask the emotion behind the poem like some rhyming does .. it has quiet sadness in each line, and i enjoyed reading this poem. ^_^
I really liked this poem. Actually I don't believe I have read a poem of yours I didn't like. You seem to be a very accomplished writer. If you have the time I would appreciate it if you would look at a few of my works and give me some advice.