*Dust in Her Eyes*

pieces of a broken heart

watch them gleam

as the pengelam swings

theres dust now in her eyes

no more tears

and all is dry

her mind is clear now

she can see you

for who you really are

Finally shes gained the strength

to carry on

and leave you to your fate

meomries flow in and out

making this so hard

but she knows that now

you never cared at all

you only stand to watch her fall

pieces of a broken heart

watch them gleam

as the pengelam swings

breathing as if for the last time

just wondering why

did you ever care at all

do you still look upon the stars

and see me in your heart

well too bad its too late

I'll never be okay

so i must leave this place

and you are forced to stay

theres dust now in her eyes

no more tears

and all is dry

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Afzal Shauq's picture

intersting... really your poetry shows me that you are a good and realistic and logic based poet... and the ideas and subjects are enough new and the way you do it is fantastic... yeah I mean it and love this piece of poem very much..and hope my poetry will also touch your heart if go through seriously..and let me know if its ok to your taste of soul...