pieces of a broken heart
watch them gleam
as the pengelam swings
theres dust now in her eyes
no more tears
and all is dry
her mind is clear now
she can see you
for who you really are
Finally shes gained the strength
to carry on
and leave you to your fate
meomries flow in and out
making this so hard
but she knows that now
you never cared at all
you only stand to watch her fall
pieces of a broken heart
watch them gleam
as the pengelam swings
breathing as if for the last time
just wondering why
did you ever care at all
do you still look upon the stars
and see me in your heart
well too bad its too late
I'll never be okay
so i must leave this place
and you are forced to stay
theres dust now in her eyes
no more tears
and all is dry
intersting... really your poetry shows me that you are a good and realistic and logic based poet... and the ideas and subjects are enough new and the way you do it is fantastic... yeah I mean it and love this piece of poem very much..and hope my poetry will also touch your heart if go through seriously..and let me know if its ok to your taste of soul...