Best of All, There Was Champagne

Mmm, endless fizzy bubbly
This is my ode to thee
Bottles of tinted green, adorned in
Golden crinkly.

POP!

Goes the anal top.
With applause and girlish singing
Rapid pouring then delighted clinking

Yumm…jizz on my tongue
Slide crisply down me
Warm me eagerly
Caress my belly
Play with me.

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9inety's picture

well, I've read all of your art

and I look forward to reading anything you and your muse care to share. This one, I must say is especially special.
You write as an elemental force that pulls your readers into different movements, rotations and transitions. Like dragonfies darting, hovering and dipping always drawn to the waters of a lazy summer lake.Your words jump up and then, they lay down, layer upon layer, peaking with the flow of mental-into-physical. All projections of a raw yet, unpretentious self that relates to everyone who really reads and feels them.
I don't forget writing like this. The words stream over in my head and I think, this is really a mortal quality. Only human beings can communicate like this and only human beings can enjoy words like yours. You produce the thoughts out of the same stuff that compels me to write...
stay safe
be good
and if you can't be good
(and I'll bet you are better than good)
be happy
Peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

Creat's picture

Thank you, friend.

Thank you, friend.


C.