The Feeling

You ever get that special feeling,

Were you feel on top of the world.

Then all comes crashing down with 3 simple words,

"It is over"

Your heart crashes to the ground.



You suddenly relise how much you actually need that feeling back,

With the one who makes you happy,

And the one who helped you through everything.



But after all the disappointment,

You find others you share the feeling with.

The perfect one who may want to share it back.



Their decision being undeceided,

You wonder what you have to do,

To get the one to feel the same,

And understand how you feel about them.



The other persons kindness,

The way they care for you,

Their lovely personality,

The perfect reason for this feeling.



This feeling being the greatest anyone can ever have.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

felt like written some poetry. first poem i wrote.

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Stephanie Cox's picture

I really like this poem,
I usually rhyme but this is a classic example of how poems really don't need to rhyme to be excellent.
This is a great start to a poetry-writing hobby! :-p
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