Moon light

 

The thin moon light cuts through the shadows , the thin night air whistles, calling into the night.  The strip of the moon goes a long way to make a single rose grow into the red sea. The moon lights up my path just a little, to see past the darkness, the sun blinds me from everything. The moon brings me away from everything. The moon stays strong but is blind from what is in front of it, but will always be there, and never goes away.  The moon is no star, it is a reflection of me.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Hey comment if you think you can help me thanks 

View counteygirl1's Full Portfolio
grimfate's picture

The sqeaky wheel gets the oil

This piece is exellent, I love light and dark comparisons. I doubt it could be any more perfect than it already is, you could experiment with  the format of it. Give it a lined verse feel or center alignmment but in truth it's unique as it is. keep penning.


this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.

Counteygirl1's picture

thank you so much. !!

thank you so much. !!