In/consequence

You,

    take the offering

As given is the right

to none availed.



When morning comes,

shy t'ward the distant sun.



Watch Jumbuck Judy sing

Her solace in the rain.


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palewingedpoetess's picture

I found this sad but so succinct and well written. To my mind came a one night stand perhaps? If I am indeed correct then to write about something so common and mundane and to express it with such a lovely linage of thoughts in poetic stance no less is really quite impressive. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Will comment on more another time. sincerely, A new fan, Melissa Lundeen.