PITY

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To understand the mystery 

Is to overstand the jury

For pain traverses the sane

While they diverse through the insane

Their love is for money

Not harmony

We believe in a being

Yet our souls are like spring

They wind each day

Easy to waylay

Yet we claim we shall overcome

But we dont know how far we've come

For us pretty,

It's a pity

Author's Notes/Comments: 

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Being and Spring

Love the slant rhyme and the way you play with the rhyme as if creating a new scheme for end words - power packed with intensity - "...We claim we shall overcome/But we do not know how far we have come." Yes to this conceptualization and to this line so well constructed ~Lady A~