Poet don't leave
You torture me so sensually
Poet don't go
I need your poems so
Rip off another satin line
Bind me to your brilliant mind
Chain me in your poetry
Tied to your philosophy
Bare me with your naked song
Tantric-ly 3 minutes long
Licking up your eloquence
Sucking spoken innocence
Thrust your deepest prose in
Slam your rock hard rhymin
Up to that G spoted tone
Take the tempo faster, moan
Sear me with your satire quick
Brand me with your sharpest wit
Pierce me with a hot metaphor
Tattoo one perfect word, I implore
Begging to suck your syllables
Taste your ink aphrodisiac edibles
Climax your phrase and meter within
Swallowing every drop of your... pen
Surmerge me in your poetry, overdose
Drown me with your passionate prose
In your poems I luxuriate
To sensually, mentally satiate
Great slam piece! Just
Great slam piece! Just accidentally happened upon this write. Nice job.
Connie:
This poem is so beautifully written with so much love and intense sexuality. The symbolisms you use that refers to intense and beautifully erotic love making is simply mind blowing. The picture you paint with your chose mastery words places the reader virtually in the mist of action-experiencing every touch and every sexual climatic satisfaction.This poem Connie is another masterpice referring to intense love making. I really loved this poem. Please my lady never never stop reading. You have very rich,intense and very beautiful artistic talents. Please tske care my lady.
Regards,
DJR
6/13/03
Connie:
From all the poetry I have read from you I can truly see you have a pure gift of poetic literature. Please like I tried to say above, please never stop writing for you possess a very beautiful literature that should be shared by all. Please take care and have a very beautiful weekend.
Regards,
Dave Richardson
6/13/2003