Erotic Poetry Slam

Poet don't leave

You torture me so sensually

Poet don't go

I need your poems so



Rip off another satin line

Bind me to your brilliant mind

Chain me in your poetry

Tied to your philosophy



Bare me with your naked song

Tantric-ly 3 minutes long

Licking up your eloquence

Sucking spoken innocence



Thrust your deepest prose in

Slam your rock hard rhymin

Up to that G spoted tone

Take the tempo faster, moan



Sear me with your satire quick

Brand me with your sharpest wit

Pierce me with a hot metaphor

Tattoo one perfect word, I implore



Begging to suck your syllables

Taste your ink aphrodisiac edibles

Climax your phrase and meter within

Swallowing every drop of your... pen



Surmerge me in your poetry, overdose

Drown me with your passionate prose

In your poems I luxuriate

To sensually, mentally satiate


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impyshideout's picture

Great slam piece! Just

Great slam piece! Just accidentally happened upon this write. Nice job.

David Richardson's picture

Connie:
This poem is so beautifully written with so much love and intense sexuality. The symbolisms you use that refers to intense and beautifully erotic love making is simply mind blowing. The picture you paint with your chose mastery words places the reader virtually in the mist of action-experiencing every touch and every sexual climatic satisfaction.This poem Connie is another masterpice referring to intense love making. I really loved this poem. Please my lady never never stop reading. You have very rich,intense and very beautiful artistic talents. Please tske care my lady.

Regards,
DJR
6/13/03

David Richardson's picture

Connie:
From all the poetry I have read from you I can truly see you have a pure gift of poetic literature. Please like I tried to say above, please never stop writing for you possess a very beautiful literature that should be shared by all. Please take care and have a very beautiful weekend.

Regards,
Dave Richardson
6/13/2003