Formal---proper
line lengths---and grammatical:
your tanka prove the
form's elasticity and
compression; exemplary!
Kyakuchuu
[jlc]
Author's Notes/Comments:
Dr. Zimmer's collection, simply entitled "Tanka" (published in 1969 by Vantage Press), is all too rare, and the most instructive and moving book of Tanka I have ever read.