I portrayed a lovely picture,
Honest to every word I held
No wrong was done, for he held the sun
And his charm it was excelled
Upon closer scrutiny
Brown hair upon his head
Bearing big blue eyes, but to my surprise
The blue transformed to red
‘I promise to adore you’
Your words became untrue
The shift was quick, and sure to stick
Did stick and wont undo
Offered all the explanations
But you see I've heard them all
Excuses and lies, expect my demise
But this time I did not fall
A very enjoyable read. Nicely
A very enjoyable read. Nicely structured.