In Conclusion...

Folder: 
All Thats Left.

i am tortured by the way i allow you to effect me

seething inside angrily,  swarming like bees, confused,

unaware, i'm more hurt than you care

and knowledge like that does wonders to make me suffer,

beneath the sky and failing, tempted by the empty beckoning

i have long considered,

just waiting, just waiting ,

will you or wont you, be the one, to best me

no, not, maybe.

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mar's picture

This poem is good. The tittle is better. Just kidding. Well the tittle called me the attention. But the poem is not the good as I was expecting. Maybe I should stop expecting. But it is good. Good for others maybe. I just not in love maybe . But It is good.
~My Best Wishes~
:O

Athalia Lystra's picture

I am not sure whether I mentioned this to you before but I found this amazing little umbrella that a little angel brought to me.
If you need to borrow it, it's right here.
:)