(not friends)
doing the inspirational release
of emotions
through poetry,
i come before,
(me)
i see the vagrant, abstract
obssessions,
of a too much time on my hands
pointed perspective,
but more at this,
"In depth form of Expression"
giver, who gives of his self
like he's selfless...
even though,
(he isn't)
can i...
manipulate my way, into
your existance,
to try, and pry
because,
you might, come apart in my hands
but your stronger than i,
(may presume)
so i'll say,
something, to make you feel
guilty,
and perhaps, you'll fall
into,
head first,
my trap, i've set for
things like you,
i'm psychic,
vampiric,
not so angelic,
are hands and knees,
a good position to plead,
from?
to make you perceive,
i really care,
but rarely, so true
the anxious await, of your blind defenses
to stray, from your senses,
i'll be there, to surprise you,
with nothing,
and everything,
to assist in unwinding...
the things that we do,
i want, what i want~
and,
if you don't give it, i might as well take it
(from you)
What can i say.... i truly enjoyed this!
I'm surprised nobody's critiqued this yet. I'm sure I've seen it appear on the random a million times, but this is the first time I read it. And.. it's wonderful. Great job. Let me grab some great quotes:
but more at this,
"In depth form of Expression"
giver, who gives of his self
like he's selfless...
even though,
(he isn't)
but your stronger than i,
(may presume)
so i'll say,
something, to make you feel
guilty,
and perhaps, you'll fall
into,
head first,
my trap, i've set for
things like you,
i'll be there, to surprise you,
with nothing,
and everything,
Fantastic writing. I am impressed.