Parade

We are the shaken

like the buildings

whose hearts reflect high

in the mirrors



And in this mortalized society

we created in our private bed

where no one knew

what turn to take

what words to say

we fell by the wayside

but on opposite sides



When I wanted nothing more

than a skimpy touch

or an intent eye

you gave me a heckle

and a foolish pride



We are warriors in this world

and a little touch of heaven

We have seen what love is

and we have broken down mountains

A spear, a glass

a commentater in a dark alley

and we have been all these

and nothing stopped us



Tradition has gotten me.



You spin a valid revolution

but it's an understatement

for who you are

Although happy and blind

your shoes crawled up to your knees



And so the summer ends

and as it shakes off its final leaves

we listen to the shuffle of feet

at this tired parade



and break.

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life_used_to_be_lifelike's picture

This is a great piece, a suberb introduction to something used with intricate words, most of which have deeper meanings smiling from underneath them. I always liked that the most about your writing. In one single line, you can tell the reader five different things, it's just up to them which meaning they derive. Whether you mean to do that or not, it's there.

I hope you kick up a dust of inspiration, and keep this kind of thing going.


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.