THE GIANT FELL

      One day, there was a giant.

      He was confident giant.

He was not just  confident, he was very, very, very, confident.

      He was so confident that he never, ever listened to anybody.  

    

      Then, one day, the giant fell down.

       Yes, the giant fell down.

       He fell down, and he was not able to get up.

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It's unusual, I like unusual. At first it sounds like a dodgy little tale some preschooler wrote lol but the ending is very ... I dunno it just seems unsettling. Awesome, I love a good poem that screws the ordinary. Keep up stuff like this.