Sitting in a cab.
Going so slow.
There's the traffic and
the rain.
The meter's running, running, running.
Funny, I was going so fast on
the Orange Line.
K is beside me see.
I like her, but dont love her.
I try, but cant do it.
it is honest and a short short story, setting in a cab in the rain, tempo: slow vs fast, characters K (nice) and you (unlover). I has everything including a WOW finish. Exceptional write - slc.
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it is honest and a short short story, setting in a cab in the rain, tempo: slow vs fast, characters K (nice) and you (unlover). I has everything including a WOW finish. Exceptional write - slc.