Thoughts

I keep stressin' in my mind,
I'm tested in my life,
So I smoke herbal remedies to calm the tides.
But this shit's still not right,
Cause tomorrow you're not promised,
Yet the sun will always rise?
There's life after love,
But end of the road for some,
The mission is your decision,
Now the hard part is done!
Knowledge is your gun
Load it, Pull the trigger, Aim it at anyone.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

All criticism is welcome..

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nightlight1220's picture

Money is a gun. Power is a

Money is a gun. Power is a gun. Judges are guns. Gossip is guns. Lots of guns... I have some dynamite biceps that have been called guns.. the list is long. Whose got the fire power? Great write!

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

ChosenFew's picture

lol

My apologies I have not logged on in a very long time, your comment made me smile :) Thank you.


"It has become appallingly clear that our technology has surpassed our humanity." -Albert Einstein

Jesster's picture

I think I could use one of

I think I could use one of those herbal remedies right about now.


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ChosenFew's picture

Indeed

it helps remedy many things


"It has become appallingly clear that our technology has surpassed our humanity." -Albert Einstein

allets's picture

There Is Life After Love - yes

Knowledge as a gun, a seeable and concrete image at last! - Nice at the end - Lady A


 

 

ChosenFew's picture

Thanks lady A! I had fun

Thanks lady A! I had fun writing this one


"It has become appallingly clear that our technology has surpassed our humanity." -Albert Einstein

allets's picture

Smokin' Herbal Remedies, Few

Never heard it called that. Nice one! Read it a second time ~~A~~