You Can..(Abridged version)

You can be my one

You can simply be

You can do what you want

As long as you're with me



You can be my strength

You can be my will

You can help me along the way

As long as you love me still



You can be my beauty

You can be my grace

You can kiss me as we dance

As long as its in your embrace



You can be my sadness

You can be my tears

You can help me wipe them away

As long as no one hears



You can be my wishes

You can be my dreams

You can give me a boost to the stars above

They aren't as far as they seem



You can tell me "I love you"

You can say it's true

You can tell me it'll never change

There's nothing I can do



You can be mine forever

Just please don't say goodbye

Because I cannot let you go

Because without you forever I would die

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I cut out all of the parts that took away the rhyme scheme, and made it better, look! =D

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let me say again and again... and even again that...love the logics expressed in this poem with a good idea.. I went through few of your poems and loved them too..you are good poet and hope you never stop writing and add more poems.. this poem is good and love it..hope you like my poems too.. and let me know if they also touch your heart.. I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published... I am a peace dreamer, love-based peace promoter... hope you be with me... let me share here one of my own famous say with you... ( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq