3 December 2005 - 10:30am — Jasper Hendriks (not verified)
Very much so indeed,
and the sad moments memorise as taking a long time,
they stress on us and making one more sad.
Nice to see your poem express the way we experience time as we almost all do, especially when we're down.
That is so true! It always seems to work like that. Your poem seems to show the big picture of how time often works. Time is something I will never understand and you said it well. Nice poem!
Very much so indeed,
and the sad moments memorise as taking a long time,
they stress on us and making one more sad.
Nice to see your poem express the way we experience time as we almost all do, especially when we're down.
Best Wishes,
Jasper Hendriks
That is so true! It always seems to work like that. Your poem seems to show the big picture of how time often works. Time is something I will never understand and you said it well. Nice poem!